jakenator85's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Oradovencha]

not so great

.:ups:.
potential

.:downs:.
completley colorless
sound has static
parts dragged on
didn't have an end. just loops
no animation, just pictures

.:comments:.
ok. i have to say i see somewhat of potential, yet you're not showing a whole lot in this. try clearing up the sound, adding color, animation, and an end. shorten up the text SLIGHTLY, don't make it too fast. i'm not telling you to stop the series all together, i'm just telling you to try harder and practice you're flash skills. like tom even said (this may not imply to you, you may not be 14) "i have faith in everyday 14 yearolds, i thought of newgrounds at that age" what i reccomend you do is, before you upload the flash you have just made, watch it in case of any errors. good luck

[Tankmen 3 Trailer]

funny

.:ups:.
the fact that you had the balls to do this
good artwork
smooth animation
narrator's voice was clear

.:downs:.
nothing

.:comments:.
this was funny. if you had better timing (like if you somehow knew about tankmen3 before it came out and you did this) than it would've been even funnier! keep up the good work!

Kevin responds:

Tankmen 3 isn't out.

[Get me Video (MYMP)]

pretty good!

.:ups:.
animation went with the song
clear audio
smooth animation
colorful
funny at times

.:downs:.
some of the animation was recycled

.:comments:.
there's not much wrong with this. i've seen a lot of things like this and do you know what was better about this one? the animation actually had something to do with the song, that's what's so much better. all in all 4/5, 9/10. keep up the good work!

masterbet responds:

tnx for a very nice comment :)

[Segurança na Internet]

not the worst

.:ups:.
smooth animation
good music
had a preloader

.:downs:.
foreign language
couldn't really tell what was going on

.:comments:.
because it was spanish, i couldn't tell what they were saying, or what was going on. other than that, 2/5, 4/10

MFRS responds:

It isn't spanish, its portuguese xD. I will put an english version. Till there, this video will remain here. Thanks for commenting :D.

[-=Showdown=-]

pretty good

.:ups:.
smooth animation
smooth sound
kept my interest

.:downs:.
short

.:comments:.
this had a lot of action and was quick. the thing is that it was a little too short. if you were to do something like this again, make it longer. all in all, 3/5, 6/10

Vitty responds:

thanks man im looking for this sorta critisism!

[April Fool]

pretty good

.:ups:.
smooth animation
smooth sound clearity

.:downs:.
kinda short
doesn't have anything to do with the song

.:comments:.
like all the other flashes that do this, its just a song with lyrics, the flash itself doesn't have anything to do with the song. other than that, it isn't totaly boring, it just lacks some things. all in all, 4/5, 9/10

[Pokemon - Epic Battle]

good

.:ups:.
funny
and great pick of people

.:downs:.
not any animation in the people
didn't have an end

.:comments:.
i have to say. nice job for a first! the humor was excelent and the flash itself wasnt too bad either. if this doesn't get blammed, i'm gonna favorite it!

[The Line Of Doom]

bad

.:ups:.
kinda funny

.:downs:.
didn't have an ending
didn't have a plot
didn't have sound
didn't have color
and the animation wasn't that smooth

.:what i have to say about this:.
this wasn't the worst thing that i have ever seen, but it isn't to great. things like this usually make it because they follow what was listed above. if you ate to do something like this again, make sure you follow what is listed above.

[30SecondsOFun]

that wasn't bad

it was kinda like clay tweening!

little-timmy responds:

Thanks for the 8/10, I'm glad you kept up on my claymations. Please check out my future claymations, I'm glad you reviewed another one of my claymations & I'm happy you liked this one.