jakenator85's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[mario's galaxy]

Okay

.:Ups:.
Kinda funny
Music
Well colored

.:Downs:.
Short

.:Comments:.
This isn't too bad. I liked the music, it was funny, and the coloring was well done as well. The only down side to this is that it is short. The next flash you make, make sure you keep up your sense of humor, good coloring, and good music. Also, make sure it is longer. You would've gotten a 10

[When Cloud Met Vincent]

Well done!

.:Ups:.
Funny
Good lip syncing
Well colored
Smooth animation

.:Downs:.
The sound quality was a little low
Short

.:Comments:.
This is really good! It was funny, well colored, smoothly animated, and the lip syncing was good to. The only things you really need to fix is to make it longer, and the voice clearity. Improve those things and you'll get a 10/10!

ShadowMaginis responds:

sorry bout the soundquality and shortness, thanx for the comment!

[Rachel's Birthday Card]

pretty good!

.:Ups:.
Colorful
Smooth animation
Good music
Excelent concept
Creative

.:Downs:.
kinda short
kinda big

.:Comments:.
This is very impresive! I like how you were somehow animating in the animation, that was cool! It was also very creative, like when the background kept changing. It was well colored, animated, and the music was good to. The only things wrong with this is that it is kinda short and very big so some of the stuff I couldn't even see. But other than that, this is still very good nonetheless. 3/5, 8/10. Keep up the good work!

[WarriorsUbF WIP]

nothing

.:ups:.
good music

.:downs:.
this is nothing
end text is way too fast

.:comments:.
this seems like it has potential, but the thing is, the wolves aren't even completely drawn, and when it end it loops, but before it does, there's text that is WAY too fast too even read. next time, finish it.

Arkeokaze responds:

I was honestly kicking myself for allowing it to loop at the end. |D I need to fix that in the future. But the text simply says the copyright, which I've re-written into the description.
Still, that's no excuse. XD;;
And yes, the cats aren't completely drawn. Hence it being a wip.

[Random Sprite Movie 2]

messed up

.:ups:.
good music
animation is smooth

.:downs:.
way off sync

.:comments:.
this looks good, but the BIG problem is that the audio is way off sync with the animation. everything else is ok. next time, watch your flash before you up-load it, that way you know of any problems that need to be fixed

[SC: The NotSo GreatEscape]

bad

.:ups:.
nothing

.:downs:.
they talk slow
it's off sync
a little quiet
no color
no music
no background
no sound effects

.:comments:.
din't try to make your own sound effects, look for some online. also, look for some music. color the people and add a background. sync it up a little but and talk a little louder. next time, when you finish a flash, watch it first to see if there are any problems so you know if you need to fix anything.

[Street Fighter Interview]

not good

.:ups:.
colorful

.:downs:.
rough audio
no animation

.:comments:.
when you're making a flash, make sure there's animation in the people, like they're moving. if you do this again with animation and smoother sound, im sure it could have a better score.

[stickybob]

not too good

.:ups:.
good music
smooth animation

.:downs:.
short
no plot
no background
what happened?

.:comments:.
i couldn't really tell what happened. it was just a stickman and he got shot from someone not even on the screen. he grew, dissapeared and then caught a bullet. then it ended. doesn't have a replay button or a background either. nice music though. try harder next time

Tibol responds:

i guess your right :(