jakenator85's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Snowed In]

This could be a frontpager, perhaps some kind of award winner I can see it. It's short and sweet, it's clever, decent, great job! You really didn't over think this too much, I can see you didn't over do it and it's clearly not under developed. This I think is truly representative of community content here on NG; not something to just clutter up the portal and not something on the other end that would just be bending over and asskissing a trending thing, you actually did your own thing and you did it good.

ComedyBlend responds:

Hey my friend, thanks so much for your feedback! It means a lot to me! Glad you enjoyed the video! :)

[AP: Obama Can't Swim]

A metaphor perhaps?

Like maybe he's... swimming in, dept? Is that what you were implying?

Five-Iron responds:

pshh.... That was way back in 2009. Now it's all about the nuclear shit and China Yuan. Keep up with the times man!

[The Brickwall Three]

It's alright.

.:Animation:.
The animation was rather smooth. No blockyness, kept a constant speed, 5/5.

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.:Art:.
The art isn't too great, then again, this is a stick. For a stick, there isn't always much to expect, just that there is some significant use of colors. This area was ok. However, there was no background. 2/5.

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.:Plot:.
The plot was good, kept me in through the whole thing, and put me in suspense. To see what happens next, I'm going to watch the next part(s). Wasn't too boring, wasn't too slow, wasn't too fast. 4/5.

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.:Audio:.
Here's where the criticism comes in. There's absolutely no sound in the beginning, but once they start to fight off a lot of people (pretty much when the giant comes), sound effects kick in. Kinda seems lazy. You were able to put in sounds, just not for the whole thing. However, when there was audio, it was pretty decent. 2/5.

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.:Overall:.
The animation and plot were great, the art needed some work, as well as the audio, especially.

alcaknight responds:

I had some real difficulty with sounds and whatnot. Thanks for the review, though! I appreciate it. :D

[Masterpeace]

I don't get it

.:ups:.
Potential
Ok lip syncing

.:downs:.
I don't get it
No color
Short
Loops

.:comments:.
This is wierd. I don't really get the joke. There isn't ay color what-so-ever, and it's short, and loops. Other than that though, it looks like it has potential, like maybe if it had color, a replay button, and was longer and explained what happened after like if anyone buys any or what they need the money for, then this may have been able to get a higher score. Plus the lip sincing isn't too bad. Try harder next time.

Nickimation responds:

Yeah I don't even get it myself. You can read the description for some clarity. And I just want you to know I wasn't trying and finished this in less than two hours. Oh and my mistake about the looping. I was in such a hurry I forgot to even add a play button XP

[When Cloud Met Vincent]

Well done!

.:Ups:.
Funny
Good lip syncing
Well colored
Smooth animation

.:Downs:.
The sound quality was a little low
Short

.:Comments:.
This is really good! It was funny, well colored, smoothly animated, and the lip syncing was good to. The only things you really need to fix is to make it longer, and the voice clearity. Improve those things and you'll get a 10/10!

ShadowMaginis responds:

sorry bout the soundquality and shortness, thanx for the comment!

[Stupid poeple ep 3r]

pretty good!

.:ups:.
colorful
smooth audio
good music
funny

.:downs:.
kinda short
not much animation

.:comments:.
This is excelent! The audio is smooth, and the music's not bad either. It's well colored, and funny. In the next episode however, I hope for it to be longer, and the people should move around more, only their arms and lips moved. Other than that though, 4/5, 8/10! I'm gonna favorite this!

zookyman2 responds:

thx for the 8/4 srry bout the lack of movement i waz just being lazy ^_^.

[WarriorsUbF WIP]

nothing

.:ups:.
good music

.:downs:.
this is nothing
end text is way too fast

.:comments:.
this seems like it has potential, but the thing is, the wolves aren't even completely drawn, and when it end it loops, but before it does, there's text that is WAY too fast too even read. next time, finish it.

Arkeokaze responds:

I was honestly kicking myself for allowing it to loop at the end. |D I need to fix that in the future. But the text simply says the copyright, which I've re-written into the description.
Still, that's no excuse. XD;;
And yes, the cats aren't completely drawn. Hence it being a wip.

[stickybob]

not too good

.:ups:.
good music
smooth animation

.:downs:.
short
no plot
no background
what happened?

.:comments:.
i couldn't really tell what happened. it was just a stickman and he got shot from someone not even on the screen. he grew, dissapeared and then caught a bullet. then it ended. doesn't have a replay button or a background either. nice music though. try harder next time

Tibol responds:

i guess your right :(

[Airin]

nothing much

.:ups:.
good graphics
nice sound

.:downs:.
not much
nothing happens

.:comments:.
this is pretty cool, but this is more of an animated .GIF, not really a flash.

Chroust responds:

Thank you for yours comments. This is my idea, but nothing isn´t perfectly. In a real, this movie is present for my ex-girl. She has like a rats as I. Body limbs - that is very intricately, I have trying my real Airin to gone, but she ever been too fast.. Thank you to all

[Pivot the game(not real)]

not too great

.:ups:.
colorful
music's not too bad

.:downs:.
animation'd not that smooth
short
fast
no sound
not really for newgrounds

.:comments:.
pivot isn't really for newgrounds. it is at least colorful and has music, but it's short and fast. it's actually so fast, i couldn't really get into it. also, why did you say it was a game? i know it says not really but why at all?

Hirachi responds:

it wasnt a game it was a pivot animation that looked like a game