jakenator85's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Free Rider 2]

Mediocre

~ Art ~
Doesn't really seem like a game that really needs all that much detail, so it doesn't really matter.

~ Controls ~
Doing wheelies and front wheelies seem way to easy to do, because the controls are really sensitive. It's not bullshit sensitive, but it is very easy to wipe out.

~ Story ~
Again, doesn't seem like the type of game that really needs a story, but if it had one, like a line of levels that you made that you have to beat if you want to unlock certain modes or character styles or vehicles or whatever, that would be cool.

~ Music ~
The fact that you don't have any seems pretty lazy. It's pretty dull just as it is. Having music in this would make this a lot better.

~ Other stuff ~
Well, it is a fun little game, but it's very simple. I like how you can get a code corresponding with the map you just made. Try mine!

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[Simple Ragdoll Engine]

Alright...

.:ups:.
Somewhat fun

.:downs:.
No music
Not a lot of things
Could use more controls

.:comments:.
This isn't too bad for a ragdoll, there isn't much to ragdoll, so there isn't much to expect. This could use music, more things to hurt the ragdoll, and (optional) if you could also use the arrow keys to move him, then this would've gotten a higher score from me. Other than that, it's not the worst ragdoll ever, it's pretty fun and might even work for a preloader, I don't know, just a thought. So, 2/5, 5/10. Not too bad, yet not too great.

MachSchneller responds:

Thanks for an honest review.

[Yoko]

Very well done!

.:ups:.
Well colored
Good graphics
Easy controls
good gameplay

.:downs:.
No music

.:comments:.
This is a very good game. It's well colored and the graphics are excelent so it doesn't get dull, the controls are easy, so I'd want to play it for a while and it never gets frustrsting, and, it's good gameplay. Basicly like mario with the gameplay, but that's not a bad thing. The only bad thing however, is the fact that there is no music. Without music, it can get dull after a while. I gave it a 5/5, 9/10. If you ever make another game, keep the easy controls concept, along with gameplay, graphics, and color. But next time, add music.

[.Jump!]

Not too good

.:ups:.
Ok music

.:downs:.
Bad graphics
Too fast
No color
No background
No sound effects
No animation in player

.:comments:.
This isn't good. The only thing enjoyable about it was the music. However, the graphics were horrible, it was just a stick-figure with a hat. The platform moves way too fast so I can't even beat level two. There's is no color. The only thing colored really are the platforms, but everything else is just lifeless. There's also no background which I guess just adds to the no color thing. There's no sound effects either, the only audio is the music. How about a scream when he falls? And, there's no animation in the player. He seriously just slides back and forth. Try harder next time.

[Space Scavenger]

Pretty good

.:ups:.
Good coloring
Good graphics
Decent sound effects

.:downs:.
Stiff controls
No music

.:comments:.
This is pretty good. The sound effects were decent and the coloring and graphics weren't bad either. The only problems are that the controls are kinda stiff, and there isn't any music. The laser doesn't go that far and you can't go diagonal. If there were music, it would be less dull. Going to the audio portal never hurts. So next time, add music, and add more movement, and you'll get a higher score. Besides that though, 3/5, 7/10. Good job!

[:: Circle ::]

Awesome!

.:ups:.
Good music
Well colored
Good concept
Addicting

.:downs:.
Confusing

.:comments:.
This is very well done! The music is awesome and the concept is good to! It's also very addicting implying that I could probably play this for hours on end. The only down-side is that the first level with the green power is confusing, I don't know what to do, and I am stuck so i don't even know how the game ends. :( But I still like it! 5/5, 9/10, keep up the good work!

StupidAnimator responds:

Thank you so much. Yes, the first green level is impossible, but I fixed it. Try it again, it should still save your progress!

[Ethereal Masters]

Amazing!

.:ups:.
Very colorful
A lot of music
Addicting
Good concept
Tutorial included

.:downs:.
Nothing

.:comments:.
This game is so well done. The coloring is amazing and the gameplay isn't too bad either. It includes a tutorial so I'm not losing every time I'm playing. There's lots of music so it never gets dull. And, it's very addicting, I could play this all summer if I wanted to......5/5, 10/10, keep up the good work!

[Sequence- a memory game]

Not much

.:ups:.
realistic sounds
worth playing

.:downs:.
Not much
Annoying sounds
Stiff controlling
No music

.:comments:.
This is alright for something "simon" like, but that's pretty much all it is. I had to press "M" like 50 times before it would actually mute because the phone sounds got annoying, which is the only stiffness in the controlls, everything else is fine though. The only other problem is that there isn't any music, going to the audio portal never hurts. 2/5, 5/10, not too shabby.

[Rpg battle - hunt I]

Not much

.:ups:.
Ok
Decent

.:downs:.
No music
No color
Not much attacks
Not much enemies

.:comments:.
This is actually ok. I don't think it's the worst, but I do think it could be better. It shows that you know action script and it's got some decency, but it doesn't have any music or color. There's not much of an attack like in RPGs when you click "attack", it'll bring up four different attacks, but this, when you click attack, you just do. Plus, sometimes, the attacks do nothing. Also, in RPGs, sometimes, more than one enemy can appear, but in this, it's always just one at a time, which is okay, but I wouldn't mind mixing up a little. I thought it was funny when you fight the last guy he's just a little miget but then grows into a dragon! LOL. That's what's decent about it. So, if you're making another game, make sure it has color, music, more enemies, more attacks, and keeps the same decency that this one did, then, it will get a higher review score. But other than that, i gave this thing a 3/5!