Score: 4

"It's alright."

submission: The Brickwall Three

date: October 26, 2009

.:Animation:.
The animation was rather smooth. No blockyness, kept a constant speed, 5/5.

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.:Art:.
The art isn't too great, then again, this is a stick. For a stick, there isn't always much to expect, just that there is some significant use of colors. This area was ok. However, there was no background. 2/5.

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.:Plot:.
The plot was good, kept me in through the whole thing, and put me in suspense. To see what happens next, I'm going to watch the next part(s). Wasn't too boring, wasn't too slow, wasn't too fast. 4/5.

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.:Audio:.
Here's where the criticism comes in. There's absolutely no sound in the beginning, but once they start to fight off a lot of people (pretty much when the giant comes), sound effects kick in. Kinda seems lazy. You were able to put in sounds, just not for the whole thing. However, when there was audio, it was pretty decent. 2/5.

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.:Overall:.
The animation and plot were great, the art needed some work, as well as the audio, especially.

Score: 5

"Alright..."

submission: Simple Ragdoll Engine

date: August 24, 2009

.:ups:.
Somewhat fun

.:downs:.
No music
Not a lot of things
Could use more controls

.:comments:.
This isn't too bad for a ragdoll, there isn't much to ragdoll, so there isn't much to expect. This could use music, more things to hurt the ragdoll, and (optional) if you could also use the arrow keys to move him, then this would've gotten a higher score from me. Other than that, it's not the worst ragdoll ever, it's pretty fun and might even work for a preloader, I don't know, just a thought. So, 2/5, 5/10. Not too bad, yet not too great.

Score: 7

"It's ok"

submission: textadventure.swf

date: July 29, 2009

.:ups:.
Worth playing
No bugs

.:downs:.
Short
Not a lot of stuff

.:comments:.
This is alright for your first game! There's no bugs and it's actually worth playing. I can't wait to escape the house. The only problem with this part is that it was short and there wasn't a lot of stuff to examine. In the next part, make sure that there's more stuff to examine. Maybe even some music would help too. I gave it a 7/10, 3/5. Not too bad, but make it longer next time with more things to interact with. If this passes, I'll add it to my favorites.

Score: 6

"It's alright"

submission: DBZ vs Naruto Part 1

date: July 27, 2009

.:ups:.
Good music
Had a background

.:downs:.
Text went a little bit too fast

.:comments:.
This isn't too bad. It had good music and it had a background. But the thing about the background is that there wasn't much of it, only two different backgrounds, so have them move around more. Plus, the text went by a little bit too fast. You can learn how to make buttons and they are rather easy to make and are helpful to the animation. I gave it a 2/5, 6/10, work at it a little harder.

Score: 9

"Pretty good"

submission: Salt vs BNanner

date: July 26, 2009

.:ups:.
Funny
Well colored
Smooth animation

.:downs:.
Short

.:comments:.
This is pretty well done. It's well colored and enjoyable, the scene with the slug was funny, and, the animation is very smooth. The only problem is that it was short. I felt that there was too little fighting and too much slug. 5/5, 9/10, if you make another flash, keep in mind, the animation was smooth, the coloring was well done, and it was funny, but add more action.

Score: 9

"Very well done!"

submission: Yoko

date: July 25, 2009

.:ups:.
Well colored
Good graphics
Easy controls
good gameplay

.:downs:.
No music

.:comments:.
This is a very good game. It's well colored and the graphics are excelent so it doesn't get dull, the controls are easy, so I'd want to play it for a while and it never gets frustrsting, and, it's good gameplay. Basicly like mario with the gameplay, but that's not a bad thing. The only bad thing however, is the fact that there is no music. Without music, it can get dull after a while. I gave it a 5/5, 9/10. If you ever make another game, keep the easy controls concept, along with gameplay, graphics, and color. But next time, add music.

Score: 6

"This is okay"

submission: The Bald Movie Quiz

date: July 9, 2009

.:ups:.
Good music
Good questions

.:downs:.
Obvious answers

.:comments:.
This is okay. It's a decent quiz because, it has good music so it doesn't get dull, and the questions are pretty well suited to. The only problems is that the answers are too easy. All in all, 2/5, 6/10. Not too bad.

Score: 1

"Not too good"

submission: .Jump!

date: July 9, 2009

.:ups:.
Ok music

.:downs:.
Bad graphics
Too fast
No color
No background
No sound effects
No animation in player

.:comments:.
This isn't good. The only thing enjoyable about it was the music. However, the graphics were horrible, it was just a stick-figure with a hat. The platform moves way too fast so I can't even beat level two. There's is no color. The only thing colored really are the platforms, but everything else is just lifeless. There's also no background which I guess just adds to the no color thing. There's no sound effects either, the only audio is the music. How about a scream when he falls? And, there's no animation in the player. He seriously just slides back and forth. Try harder next time.

Score: 8

"It's ok"

submission: Always Brightest Jackson

date: July 3, 2009

.:ups:.
Easier than normal dressups
A lot to put on
There's a reset button
Well colored
Good graphics

.:downs:.
No music
One background
Doesn't move

.:comments:.
This is pretty good for a dressup. It was well colored and the graphics were pretty good to. It puts the clothes on automaticly instead of you guessing it's in the right spot, which makes it easier to put clothes on, compared to other dressups. There's also a lot to put on him, so that means you had to have put a lot of effort into this. Plus, there's a reset button. The only problems however was that there's no music, so it's pretty dull. You'd expect a Michael Jackson song to be playing. Also, in some dressups, you can change the backgroung, which would be nice. And finally, when you press "Show", I expected him to move around a little bit, but he just stayed in the same position he always was in. 3/5, 8/10, pretty good!

Score: 5

"Not too great."

submission: Chub 1 and the Voices

date: July 3, 2009

.:ups:.
Ok coloring
Worth watching
Ok animation

.:downs:.
Bad grammer
Good syncing, then gets bad
Audio could be better

.:comments:.
This isn't the worst thing in the world, but a lot better could have been done. The grammer wasn't good for start. It was synced up pretty good, but then it wasn't synced up at all. And also, the audio could've been smoother. Sounded like maybe you were talking too close to the mic. It's not all bad though, the coloring was alright, the animation was ok, just a little shaky though, and it was worth watching. It wasn't boring, so that's why I watched it. 2/5, 5/10, try a little harder next time. I always recommend watching the flash first before you upload it, that way, you know if there are any problems before hand.