This definitely feels like it would fit better as part of a collaborated flash where you would be part of a bigger project. On it's own, this feels rushed or incomplete. This isn't really that bad; I see too many submissions like this where it's just the two people on a white background, or there's no sound, or it's just endless looping thrusting or sucking. You at least had a beginning and an end, but the animation coulda had more time put into it, and maybe if you kept the promotion in the description then this would've been a lot better. This is a work in progress, I'd definitely like to know how these two got together haha. What's their story? Not to take away from the sex but like, what led up to it? It's all your choice but all I'm saying is just go further.